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starfighter1953

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broken arrow ok.
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looking forward to all of your help.thanks in advance.1.
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Comments, per req:

1. I think this image would be improved by cropping out some or all of the immediate foreground and heightening the sense that the viewer is 'flying' over the area. A slight levels tweak will clear up the haze in the image as well.

2. Perfectly exposed and focused, great detail in the rock, but I think it would do better if you had a little more of the surrounding area; right now you have to look closely to see that it's anything more than a large rock.

Overall nice work and good effort, looking forward to seeing more.

Just my $00.02 worth - your milage may vary.

~John
 

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