what do you think of this one?

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What do you think of this? Which one do you like better. I like the first one better but wanted to get everyones opinion. I know it would be better with a real flower. Im gonna get one and try it again. Just wanted opinion on the lighting. What do you think about the composition too. I know it is kinda centered but i think it looks ok. I didnt want to offset it and have to much dead space.

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Yep, get the real flower.

Second one is better. It has more contrast and gives it a bit more dimension.

Play more with depth of field.

And yes you can move the rose out of the center without creating negative space: make the shot tighter - zoom in. Don't leave it in the center.
 
I also like the lighting in #2. I would shoot it at the same focal point, and possibly play with the crop.

Maybe try different color flowers...
 

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