Writing a short bio

[Eventer]

Probably a little bit off topic...
But i need to write a short bio about myself for the photography business i just got accepted for.

I suck at writing these - Im a academic retard!! LOL What should it include? This is what Ive got so far

"I’m 17 years old and currently based in Otorohanga, King Country.
I’ve only become serious about photography after I brought my first DSLR a couple of years ago. Since then I’ve …

My love for horses developed at a young age, much before cameras became an obsession. I’ve competitively ridden horses since the age of 11 successfully in eventing, show jumping and dressage. Since getting serious about photography combining the two only seemed obvious. "

I need more right?

 

[MrBarney]

You need more

Which competitions? What was your first? Where, when and how did you do?
Edit: - what was it that got you interested in photography?

Have a look through some on biography.com for ideas on what to include. This one seems about the right length:
Diane Crump Biography - Biography.com