Beautiful Sohie c & C please

[davekas2]

Hi, this was the first edit from a shoot last Friday night, I would love C & C, on the photographt and my retouching work ( 2 hour retouch)

thanks, Dave

 

[cgipson1]

Nice shot... but the eyes look off to me. The pupils are strange.. eyes are open about the same but the pupil on the left (her right) has color around it... the other pupil does not. The really dark shadow at the corner of the eye (her left) looks really bad too....

the hair across the face is ok.. but is close to being too much.

did you edit the pupils? and the highlights? I would consider reworking it....

 

[rgregory1965]

That is one beautiful subject.....nice pic

 

[Markw]

I agree with everything cgipson said. Besides all of that, the crop is really bad to me. It's either entirely too cropped in, or not enough. I don't like the solo head look here. It's vey off-putting to me. I'd say crop in for a nice face shot (but, this esthetic would require a different, more contrasty lighting), or, if this is a crop, crop back out a bit.

Mark

 

[mishele]

Very pretty young lady.... Dang I love her hair!!=)
2 nits I have...
1. The crop gives me the feeling that her head is in a box, kinda creepy. Like Mark said, I would try to messing w/ the crop.
2. The angle you shot at has made her nostrils prominent in the picture. The one is almost centered and draws my attention away from her eyes. Cropping or a slight angle change could prolly help that.
Keep shooting!!