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Two more shots from the same location.

Any thoughts or criticisms? I am trying to learn to see things more creatively.

Reflections of LA. The reflecting pool of the Ferraro building.
DSC_0107.jpg by Javier Descalzi, on Flickr

Disney Concert Hall.

DSC_0109.jpg by Javier Descalzi, on Flickr

Thanks for looking.
 

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#1 is really a nice shot.
Perhaps try a tighter crop to maximize the design elements and fill the frame with interesting stuff?

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Thanks Traveller. And thanks for the edit.

This is one of the few times that I have "seen" the picture with my mind's eye before setting up the shot. A bit of a breakthrough moment for me. I hope I have more.
 

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Hi, Desi; these are very good; the first image is to be named "Blue" and that is a really lovable blue!!! i loved equally well the calm reflections in the next and you did not let that be disturbed by any POI ;)
Thirds is not bad either

Regards :D
 
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Thanks guys, your comments made me very happy.
 

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I prefer your original over Travelers crop. I find the blue green wedge at the top an interesting break in color, and it repeats the wedge of blue beside it on the left of it.
 

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All very nice shots, and I really like the first. The second doesn't speak to me as much (maybe it's too small on my screen) but I can see you thought about it, so you get an A+ from me!
 

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