First shots! C&C please :)

[kielmaru]

So I finally got my Canon 450d outside to test what I learned so far in m photography lessons. I actually dont love my shots that much since there's not much great stuffs to shoot in the place I went to.. or I'm just uncreative.

Heres the full album: Photo Album - Imgur

C&C please. Thanks.

 

[MWG]

The idea is in the right place, but your composition in the 1st photo is lacking. I would have put the shelf at the bottom of the frame. Your other one is overexposed.

 

[kielmaru]

Thanks! I.. I think I got a photo of it exactly what you said. I guess I deleted it..
Yeah. I didn't have time changing the setting of my camera. It was just a few seconds when the bird flew away.