Flower Vase in a window sill

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I just thought I would get some ideas on these photos I took today. Like/dislike? How could I improve them? Feel free to edit/repost them.

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I do like the third one. It looks as if the window is an indentation on a black surface. I like the way the line of the window is straight rather than the surrounding wall.

I think I would like to see a bit more space at the top of the window and also to the right, but failing that, I think a tighter crop works too. What do you think?

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On second thoughts, I think I like your original better :roll:
 

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Beautiful work!!! I love the graphic feel and the colours you chose are on point. Plus I am a sucker for glass brick.

My only suggestion would be to try some super saturated.
 

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I like the first one best. The second one looks flatter then the other two, I prefer the sense of depth. On 2 and 3, I agree with raindrops, I like a tighter crop, and a balance (tho maybe not perfect symmetry) in the 'black space' around the window.
I also love me some glass bricks.
 

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the third one is amazing..i love the color of your shot..thnx for sharing with us..
 

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