Haven't posted any in awhile but here's what i've been up too.

[myshkin]

I think you did a good job on them except her facial expression kills 1 and 3 for me

 

[mwcfarms]

Thanks, I see if next time I can get her to lighten up a bit. I do have more where she is a bit more playful. No, the serious side isn't forced, thats just her on most days. You know sullen teenager.

 

[mwcfarms]

I think you did a good job on them except her facial expression kills 1 and 3 for me

By face I'm assuming you mean her facial expression?

 

[tirediron]

Neat - are you using a big soft-box?

 

[Ron Evers]

Nicely done but I do hate the mutilations.

 

[MohaimenK]

I like #2 did you use a fan?

 

[kundalini]

Cool stuff Dee. :thumbsup:

Two tiny little nits. I'd crop just a wee bit tighter on #1 to completely remove her top (lower right corner). #3 maybe an intsy bit wider to include the strap on the right side.

 

[myshkin]

I think you did a good job on them except her facial expression kills 1 and 3 for me

By face I'm assuming you mean her facial expression?

I actually changed it before reading your reply because I knew that might sound weird. yes defintely mean facial expression. I also think it looks forced and uncomfortable.

 

[mwcfarms]

Neat - are you using a big soft-box?

Yup its 32 by 40 inches.

Nicely done but I do hate the mutilations.

I'm sorry but what mutilations, I see mutiliations and think piercings but she doesn't have any piercings, Those are swarofski crystals adhered with makeup glue if thats what you mean.

I like #2 did you use a fan?

Not this time, she just shook her head back and forth and the light froze it so no blur. Just took a burst of shots.

Cool stuff Dee. :thumbsup:

Two tiny little nits. I'd crop just a wee bit tighter on #1 to completely remove her top (lower right corner). #3 maybe an intsy bit wider to include the strap on the right side.

Thanks, I saw the tiny bit of shirt after I editted it and smacked my forehead V-8 style and I will have to go back and look to see if I cropped three. I can't remember.

I think you did a good job on them except her facial expression kills 1 and 3 for me

By face I'm assuming you mean her facial expression?

I actually changed it before reading your reply because I knew that might sound weird. yes defintely mean facial expression. I also think it looks forced and uncomfortable.

Thanks for all the great feedback guys. The model of course is my 14 year old daughter who is of course your stereotypical teenager who isn't quite comfortable in her skin yet and that shows in some of the pics. Next shoot I will get her to be a bit more bubbly. Serious is how she is normally, this kid reads psychology magazines & books for fun and reads Poe and Chaucer. She is light years ahead of me in intelligence. Some of this comes across I think as too serious. All I can say is thank goodness she's only interested in dead old guys and not older alive guys. :lmao:

 

[Ron Evers]

"I'm sorry but what mutilations, I see mutiliations and think piercings but she doesn't have any piercings, Those are swarofski crystals adhered with makeup glue if thats what you mean."

What a relief.

 

[mwcfarms]

Lol i may be liberal but not cuckoo. I would kick her butt all the way to her dads just so he could kick her @ss back home again. Equal opportunities and all.