Hazy self portraits- landscape orientation...

[_jessicalynn_]

Actually you should. lol. The photos are great and you're very pretty. I hope my duckface comment wasn't taken as harsh. It's just a personal thing with me. I hope you're not discouraged from posting photos here. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Thanks and I'm not easily offended at all! But I have to say, I wasn't making a duck face. That's just my face. But whatever.

 

[TordFuglstad]

Now, to bring this thread back to subject..

I think the composition in both photos are not too bad. I do like it when you chop a little bit off the top of the head, like Hurley.
The poses are good, only a little shame you seem a bit stressed out around your mouth when you are such a beautiful model.
Would love to see you completely relaxed.
I'll not comment on the lack of contrast seen as that is a part of the effect.

All in all, this is not bad at all and just a few minor tweaks and they will be lovely.