Just a few photos of people up for c&c!
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If you edit your first post and choose "advanced edit", or something to that effect, you can then choose manage attachments. It's confusing at least to me the first time this happened to me.
Some C&C:
Photo one - great expression, nice lighting especially on the face, imo, but I'm still learning myself. It's a shame the top part of her hair is cut off. Also the rim lighting is really really hot at the top and in a distracting way. It competes with her nicely lit face, imo. Maybe if you cropped the photo some to get rid of that area... Background is nice and non-distracting.
Photo two - Nice capture, really hot spot upper left.
Photo three - The leading line in the background is nice but her nose is lit up as is her fingers. Plus the crop is cutting right into her wrist which I find distracting. I think the first two photos are nice but the third one just has too many problems with it.
Some C&C:
Photo one - great expression, nice lighting especially on the face, imo, but I'm still learning myself. It's a shame the top part of her hair is cut off. Also the rim lighting is really really hot at the top and in a distracting way. It competes with her nicely lit face, imo. Maybe if you cropped the photo some to get rid of that area... Background is nice and non-distracting.
Photo two - Nice capture, really hot spot upper left.
Photo three - The leading line in the background is nice but her nose is lit up as is her fingers. Plus the crop is cutting right into her wrist which I find distracting. I think the first two photos are nice but the third one just has too many problems with it.
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C&C per req:
1. Cute expression, but there seems to be some perspective distortion; her head appears very large in relation to her body, and her face is slightly soft, almost like a 1.2/1.4 shot wide open. I think this would benefit from a square crop.
2. Great moment; watch the little things like the toes of her boots cropped/nearly cropped at the bottom of the frame, and consider some fill from camera right to avoid the 'dark hole' look of her eyes.
3. Good job on positioning the glasses and avoiding reflections. I think this would be nicer with a square or portrait crop. When shooting long-haired subjects, watch the hair; the strands that have blown across her lips really hurt the image.
Overall a nice set, with some minor thoughts for improvements.
Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.
~John
1. Cute expression, but there seems to be some perspective distortion; her head appears very large in relation to her body, and her face is slightly soft, almost like a 1.2/1.4 shot wide open. I think this would benefit from a square crop.
2. Great moment; watch the little things like the toes of her boots cropped/nearly cropped at the bottom of the frame, and consider some fill from camera right to avoid the 'dark hole' look of her eyes.
3. Good job on positioning the glasses and avoiding reflections. I think this would be nicer with a square or portrait crop. When shooting long-haired subjects, watch the hair; the strands that have blown across her lips really hurt the image.
Overall a nice set, with some minor thoughts for improvements.
Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.
~John
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