Just messing around (NSFW!)

[darich]

I might also add that she has no neck...

I'd be willing to bet that she does in fact have one....it's just not visible in this particular shot!
:mrgreen:

 

[Aquarium Dreams]

She is very fetching. I particularly like the curve of her hip. Is she high?

 

[WDodd]

Lol, I definitely wasn't going for a porn look. But I can see where you are all coming from. I don't have an external or a shoe mount flash yet so that wasn't an option for me. It was just a spur of the moment type thing and I wanted to see what everyone thought :mrgreen:.

She is coming to visit me here at school this weekend so maybe I will give it another shot and remove some of the "porn" if I can.

 

[Alpha]

lol I love how it's all men commenting on this...

 

[Alex_B]

lol I love how it's all men commenting on this...

we have a girl here commenting as well

well it is hard to evaluate the image without evaluating the girl shown but I thin kwe managed

 

[Funky]

i dont know if im to late to add my 2 cents but i guess i will anyway, the fake border looks cheesy the shadow cast by the wall could be removed in photoshop, or better yet, acctualy compose the picture, that brings us to the composition, its just BLAM theres nothing that makes me go, wow what an amazing looking person shes in the middle of the frame and you can see where the wall meets the ceiling. oh and the used washcloth thingy should be taken out. loofa it up babe....loofa it up.


edit: she just got in the shower, the back of her hair is frizzy, the wet part of her hair is in her face, but theres no point in it. and she looks as previously stated deer in the head lights...lol...im over evaluating this picture.

 

[JustAMom]

very amatuer porn to me.

 

[Sw1tchFX]

loofa it up babe....loofa it up.

lol...im over evaluating this picture.

I love how it's all men commenting on this...

I LOL'd!

 

[Aquarium Dreams]

we have a girl here commenting as well

Thank you Alex.

Agreed that the subject is compelling, and glad WDodd will have the opportunity to reshoot.

 

[jimiismydaddy]

Cool concept with the water and all, bad execution.

 

[newrmdmike]

no neck, she looks like a drug addict, like look at her eyes, she looks stoned.

i think the border is cheesy, and i dislike the shadows from the flash

 

[xfloggingkylex]

no neck, she looks like a drug addict, like look at her eyes, she looks stoned.

i think the border is cheesy, and i dislike the shadows from the flash

thats pretty harsh.

It just looks like you caught her off guard.

 

[eravedesigns]

she isnt a good model I would find another subject.

 

[newrmdmike]

that may be harsh, but thats how i see it. this is a critique thread, not a "lets see how nice we can be thread"

i think annie L once said somthing like leave your friendship at the door when it comes to critiques

 

[Alpha]

WDodd, you're obviously an incompetent photographer, so you can just send her my way