Ok, first posted boudior. Don't be too harsh. :-)

[bennielou]

This is a highschool chum of mine. Another high school chum let us use his mansion even though you can't really see it here. (It was amazing. I love my house, but came home feeling like I lived in a crude lean to after leaving)
Anyhoo, she wanted the works. It's harder doing boudior for a 45 year old than a 20 year old. (I can already here the "amens" from the boudior shooters out there).

Anyhoo, I wanted to share these, and see if there is something I can improve on. (Not skin, she wants it this way).

 

[keith foster]

I really like #2,3,4,5 and 6. You have done a really nice job of posing her in flattering ways and capturing her personality.


In #2 I would like it even better if there was a little less shadow or a softer shadow on the right side of her face. Even so I like it a lot.

#1 doesn't look like it belongs with the other 5. It seems awkward somehow and artificial. Sorry I can't be more specific than that. It just doesn't grab me like the others did.

Great shots, I bet your friend was very happy with them!

 

[bennielou]

I really like #2,3,4,5 and 6. You have done a really nice job of posing her in flattering ways and capturing her personality.


In #2 I would like it even better if there was a little less shadow or a softer shadow on the right side of her face. Even so I like it a lot.

#1 doesn't look like it belongs with the other 5. It seems awkward somehow and artificial. Sorry I can't be more specific than that. It just doesn't grab me like the others did.

Great shots, I bet your friend was very happy with them!

Don't apolgize. That is what I wanted to know. Number one is her hubbies favorite outfit. They were highschool sweethearts and he still remembers her as a cheerleader.

 

[JaimeGibb]

Did you edit her legs/butt and stomach in the last one?

 

[transformed]

nice job! #2 seems very pink toned to me-

 

[pcacj]

2 and 3 look really nice to me. Not a fan of her hair in any of the other pics. The last one has potential if she would turn slightly towards the camera or slightly more away, show a big flash of teeth and get the hair pulled back.

 

[c.cloudwalker]

Well, I won't be too harsh because I don't know what to say since I don't get this kind of photography. If my wife gave me some shots like this I wouldn't know what to do with them.

Now, give me a beautiful artsy B&W nude, that I understand

 

[Big]

It's harder doing boudior for a 45 year old than a 20 year old.

She's 45?!!! :shock:

 

[unnecessary]

i dunno wtf is going on with the last pic. Her body looks....... weird ....

 

[Dominantly]

I'm not quite sure how I feel about them, but I can say with full certainty that #4 has to go.

 

[Sam6644]

I like that bedroom set from Macy's.

 

[rubbertree]

#4 and #5 are my least favourites. The windows are filthy in #5!
But the rest are fun. Hope she enjoys them.

 

[TiaS]

1,5, and 6 are good photos but it looks like she is posing, which is a stiff kinda look rather than natural and relaxed. Out of those 3, number 6 is my favorite. I am liking the reflection behind her. I am not a fan of number 4. I think that 2 and 3 area amazing shots. Good job on these.

 

[bennielou]

Did you edit her legs/butt and stomach in the last one?

A bit but not a crazy amount. I did do some tummy work and a rear raising.

 

[bennielou]

It's harder doing boudior for a 45 year old than a 20 year old.

She's 45?!!! :shock:

Yep, and wanted to look 20 again. She's kept herself up though. I didn't have to do a ton.