Overexposed?

[o hey tyler]

Well here's the story for the one that couldn't make out the obvious!

I know you didn't ask for C&C on the flyer, but something you may want to consider is that with the way your photos are edited (regardless of any argument for or against that style), and the pastel colors you've chosen for the text, the text is kind of hard to read.

One thing you might try is adding a pure white layer between the photos and the text, and adjusting it's opacity to something like 25-50%. That would wash out the photos and give them that "airy" feel you're going for, while also giving the text a chance to pop.

Just my unsolicited opinion.

I agree. Too many different fonts and the colors are hard to read.

 

[ababysean]

I love the collage, but I do not like the font.....

 

[o hey tyler]

I do not like the font(s).....

Fixed.

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

I agree. Too many different fonts and the colors are hard to read.

Do you think it really matters?

 

[o hey tyler]

I agree. Too many different fonts and the colors are hard to read.

Do you think it really matters?

No... And I don't think she'd take my advice anyway. :greenpbl:

 

[Dao]

I wonder if TPF can add a "Dislike" button so that I can use it in this thread.

 

[mishele]

If we add the "dislike" button can we also add a "I don't care" button too?!!

 

[vtf]

Insert self emoticon.

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

You cut off the knuckles, the flash is harsh casting harsh shadows, you should wear a shirt that won't get lost in the background, maybe try a different angle, maybe try a cleaner font with better kerning. But not bad over all, I like the concept. Definitely reshoot this.

 

[mishele]

You cut off the knuckles, the flash is harsh casting harsh shadows, you should wear a shirt that won't get lost in the background, maybe try a different angle, maybe try a cleaner font with better kerning. But not bad over all, I like the concept. Definitely reshoot this.

Why do you have to be such a dick all the time? This shot doesn't need to be re-shot. I think it was very artistic of him to make himself blend into the background. The font he chose is perfect, it matches his blown out knuckles.

 

[vtf]

You cut off the knuckles, the flash is harsh casting harsh shadows, you should wear a shirt that won't get lost in the background, maybe try a different angle, maybe try a cleaner font with better kerning. But not bad over all, I like the concept. Definitely reshoot this.

Why do you have to be such a dick all the time? This shot doesn't need to be re-shot. I think it was very artistic of him to make himself blend into the background. The font he chose is perfect, it matches his blown out knuckles.

:lmao:

Better shirt?

One night I figured I was tired of the standard emoticons so I'd come up with using self portraits. This one was also used for my Bin Laden thread.
Thanks Mishele, he's just screwing around. BTW my nuckles are that white.

More to come...

 

[mishele]

I know he was kidding I was messing w/ him.....lol

 

[KevinPutman]

My troll thread is obviously better.

 

[The_Traveler]

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[kundalini]

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