photo club response

Discussion in 'The Professional Gallery' started by crls_santino, Nov 22, 2016.

  1. vintagesnaps

    vintagesnaps Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    I wouldn't have known they were beginners from looking at their photos. You must be doing something right!


     
  2. mrca

    mrca No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Good exposure and white balance on faces. I agree you need the entire heads and separation from the background either by light from back or light on the bg. Might consider lighter colored shirts and background. That would give some separation with the lenses and you from bg and be a less somber, more cheery, welcoming mood to attract members to a group. Great expressions that tell the viewer you are approachable and friendly and that is important if you want people to join your group. Bambi Cantrell said expression trumps perfection but then Jerry Ghionis pointed out that expression plus perfection trumps expression alone. The above poster is correct, with the faces the brightest, highest contrast, the eye is pulled there and they are the most important part of the frame. I would like to see the lenses a bit brighter as they aren't unimportant to the message and definitely at least have the ones closest to you sharp. That's just how I would do it, not the absolute right way, just my way. You might try that and see. Also, consider conversion to b & w.
     
  3. crls_santino

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    some work from our last workshop:
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