Portraits Take 2 - C&C Requested

[reedjam99]

Ok, I took a second look at the photo shoot I did two weekends ago, taking into account the comments from this thread. I picked a few different shots where I hadn't lopped off limbs, and lightened a few shots up as well. I also added one new shot of a different group from the same day.

This isn't a complete reshoot, so I wasn't able to add a reflector as suggested (something I'll definitely do on the next shoot). Bearing that in mind, thoughts? Feel free to be brutal, the tips last time were very helpful.

Thanks in advance.

Different shot of the first pose, all limbs attached:

Different pose, lightened up, all limbs attached:

Different group. I like the composition, and think the lighting is less flat on this than some of the originals.

 

[westerngirl14]

#1 and #2 : much much better, "with all limbs attached".... I'm getting a kick out of that wording! Like they could just put them on or off at will! haha

Anyways, yes, this is much better, it improves the overall picture, and the lightening really helped too. Great job.