Sea and Shore

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by David Kennedy, Oct 19, 2016.

  1. David Kennedy

    David Kennedy TPF Noob!

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  2. Taveuni

    Taveuni TPF Noob!

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    Well done!
    The first one is pretty good, nice subject matter and a good feeling of energy. You probably could do well to back the highlights down a bit,

    Second one is excellent, great use of repeating patterns and subtle human presence with a few small figures, a couple of cars and some footprints.
    cropping a tad from the bottom is worth considering.
     
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    alexis.alvarez No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Re the second photo: I agree with Taveuni, you might consider cropping just a bit on the bottom, but I'd also think about cropping on the right -- I find the bottom right corner distracting. It might work really well in a square format.
     

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