The second edit does not emphasise the original flaws as much as the first does, and while I find the tones in 2 very much on the BLAND side (pale, grey), that one seems more pleasing to the eye overall, even though I must add that a photo AS blurred (camera shake, I gather) is no longer pleasing to the eye per se. I always want to adjust my glasses (pun fully intended with what she's doing herself) to get a better vision!