Some shots at the park...C&C welcomed

[c_pass]

Took some shots at the park today... C&C welcomed



Image 1 - Attempting to use lines to lead the eye through the mage

Image 2 - Dropped a rock in the lake and caught this chaos... I like the ripples..it reminds me of how in life, one event effects so many other that you might never know about.

Image 3 - Tried to work with repetition here.

Thanks for any critiques & comments

 

[Shadowbox]

On image two I would normally like to see more brightness but you know with the whole theme I think you really nailed the tone and exposure for it. The first one is really a hard thing to capture, I think, because they look so neat in person and you have this vision but it doesn't translate as well to photos though I happen to really like the focus on it. I see some pretty red/pinks in the water in the third one but it's still kinda boring.. I think too much dead space (water) in the center and then the ducks shoved into the top right and lower left corners. I think it would be better to choose one set of ducks and crop to it and then lighten it up.

 

[Neiby]

I love that bridge! Very nice photo.

 

[avajetl]

for me i love the advice it gave me more ideas.

 

[c_pass]

On image two I would normally like to see more brightness but you know with the whole theme I think you really nailed the tone and exposure for it.

Thanks, I tried to brighten it, but started to lose the color…

The first one is really a hard thing to capture, I think, because they look so neat in person and you have this vision but it doesn't translate as well to photos though I happen to really like the focus on it.

Thanks...

I see some pretty red/pinks in the water in the third one but it's still kinda boring.. I think too much dead space (water) in the center and then the ducks shoved into the top right and lower left corners. I think it would be better to choose one set of ducks and crop to it and then lighten it up.

I tend to get told about dead space a lot on here..lol I think its because I work in design and am always looking to have space for copy…lol ..
I'll see how it looks with cropping one set of ducks

 

[c_pass]

I love that bridge! Very nice photo.

Thanks!

 

[bazooka]

I think what you did with #3 might work if you had a little more room around the two pairs.

 

[bennielou]

VERY cool stuff. Well done. Thanks for sharing.

 

[KmH]

Image 2 - Dropped a rock in the lake and caught this chaos... I like the ripples..it reminds me of how in life, one event effects so many other that you might never know about.

 

[c_pass]

Thanks for the edit KmH....