Still just practicing! C&C Please!

[Tracybug]

I have not posted anything in quite some time, but would really love some feedback on these photos I took of my daughter. Any advice or suggestions are so helpful!

 

[tirediron]

Overall, a nice set. I'm NOT a fan of the vignettes. She's a very attractive young lady, and clearly not uncomfortable in front of the camera, however she does seem to be forcing her expression just a little. I would suggest some other poses and expressions.

 

[Designer]

Join the "practicing club"!

#1 Frame and composition o.k., model should be more "animated" i.e.: chin up at the very least.
#2 Pose great, frame off a little, would benefit from some additional light under her chin.
#3 Pose great, frame great, lighting not bad.
#4 Pose, frame, lighting, all very good!
#5 Pose and frame very good, needs a little more light light on her right side, same as above.

All in all, quite successful!

 

[rexbobcat]

All that's said above, but the thing I notice the most is that the white balances appear to all different.

The lighting is the nicest in the 4th image.

 

[DiskoJoe]

Yeah i liked #4 as well. The lighting was nice even if the white balance was a bit off. One other thing I noticed in every other picture is that she is leaning her head slightly down. This should be prevented. This is causing a shadow to be cast on the eyeridge and making her forehead slightly overexposed. CHIN UP! Not too far up though. Just perpendicular to the camera.

Dont like #1. The straight forward shot make her look wide. In #3 you can see the obvious benefits of a slight change in the pose. She looks much slimmer and accentuates her curves better.

 

[fractionofasecond]

I like these alot. The 4th image makes her hair look red when her hair appears to be brown in the rest. I really like all of them, great shots.

 

[Mully]

2&5 have a slight green/blue.... I like the set and #4 I like best.

 

[planC]

#4works for me. Expression looks forced