The Pier outside of my hotel room

[MitchStrp]

what do you think? Any info is much appreciated!

 

[manaheim]

I'd say nope.

For one, the focus point choice is a little weird... looks like 2/3 of the way down the fence.

Second the choice of vertical position makes the lines all line up to that far fence railing, so it's leading you there, but then there's nothing there interesting to see, and what is there to see is out of focus.

Third, it's centered... sorta. When you choose to center something you need to NAIL IT DEAD CENTER or it won't generally work.

Fourth, and not really least important, is there isn't really a 'subject'... you can get away without one if you have enough other interesting stuff going on, but here you really do not.

Sorry, just not a win.

 

[Parker219]

I think manaheim nailed the critique!

 

[manaheim]

If I had a hammmeeerr....

 

[MitchStrp]

haha okay, thanks for the critique! I am so new at this, still learning

 

[Parker219]

Since you are new at being...well....new. Might I suggest a less offensive profile picture?

 

[manaheim]

Keep shooting, keep posting. It's a great way to learn.

 

[manaheim]

Since you are new at being...well....new. Might I suggest a less offensive profile picture?

You got a problem with fuzzy rabbits?!?!?

 

[MitchStrp]

Since you are new at being...well....new. Might I suggest a less offensive profile picture?

You got a problem with fuzzy rabbits?!?!?

hahahaha! only picture on my computer of me at the moment.. in time ill change it. Are there any stickies for just being a noob at this stuff? just tips to help a guy out?

 

[manaheim]

Stickies are against the law at TPF. We believe only in the freedom to rehash the most assinine topics 300x a day.

LET FREEDOM RING!!!