michael9000000
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- May 21, 2012
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- Norfolk, VA
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This is your friend, really?
Color and overall feel are nice. I think you're missing some detail in the face, though.
I think there needs to be more contrast and more sculpting in the face. You lost all detail in portraiture. Did you use a layer mask?
I would ease up on the clarity slider, add contrast back in, and give a bit more saturation. For Portraiture, I would use a layer mask and add back in the detail (around hair, eyes, creases) after you run it. Just so everything isn't so blended. I like the first 2 poses, but the last pose is too straight on. I like your idea behind this though.I think there needs to be more contrast and more sculpting in the face. You lost all detail in portraiture. Did you use a layer mask?
You and Tee gave the same feedback, so I'll give you both the same reply.Thanks for your critique. The processing was weird by design... The method was to raise the exposure (in RAW editor) by 1 to 1.5 stops and drop the contrast, clarity, and vibrance dramatically. I would've probably done better to adjust the lighting to produce stronger shadows SOOC. That could've produced a more detailed final image while still retaining the 'porcelain' feel. Your thoughts?
#3 Looks like a mug shot.
It's too soft for my taste, too. What's the Youtube link (if you don't mind sharing)? I might like to give it a try.