The Study - Model (Last Room) C&C Welcome!

[Trever1t]

Give me your impressions here? My attempt to go dark & contemplative.


_POR9445-Edit by WSG Photography, on Flickr

 

[Designer]

Should be darker.

 

[Trever1t]

Is this better? Dropped .2ev

_POR9445-Edit-2 by WSG Photography, on Flickr

 

[Rick50]

I like the first one. Has good balance. Not one complaint!

 

[EIngerson]

I like the first one better also.

 

[FITBMX]

Nothing really jumps out at me as being wrong in this one, but someone else may see something!
Look good to me!!!
Is this the last of this shoot?

 

[Trever1t]

Last room, we'll there's one more on my flickr that I am not sure I'll post. I have a few more I may edit; a headshots and closer view of her by the doors

Thanks, I like the light better in the first one also

 

[otherprof]

Give me your impressions here? My attempt to go dark & contemplative.


_POR9445-Edit by WSG Photography, on Flickr

The paperbacks, especially leaning in the casual way they do, take away from the dark, comtemplative mood, and clash with the furniture.

 

[Trever1t]

Yeah, details. Wish I had replaced them with catchy titles!

 

[JustJazzie]

This might be my favorite of the bunch.

I wish there was just a hair more breathing room under her elbow.

 

[Designer]

I like the light better in the first one also

You said you wanted it to feel "dark & contemplative".

 

[JoeW]

Give me your impressions here? My attempt to go dark & contemplative.


_POR9445-Edit by WSG Photography, on Flickr

Good photo, nice work. Let me offer some reactions/suggestions...

1. I don't think this is too dark. I'd actually like it to be a tad lighter so we see more detail/lace on her top.
2. Wish her right hand didn't appear to be a fist but instead, fingers were extended to laying on the arm of the chair or the desk.
3. I like the hair: how the part is on the far side, the bulk of the hair is on the camera's/viewer's side.
4. I rate her actual pose as "okay but not great." She's in a study, a big oversized comfy chair--all sorts of things she could do with that basic pose to make it look more relaxed or reflective or energized or sexy or something. It's not a bad pose or a stiff pose, it's just that she's sexy, it's a good location, she's dressed provocatively and so that pose seems like a missed opportunity to me.

 

[D-B-J]

CLONE OUT THAT DAMN OUTLET!

 

[FITBMX]

Last room, we'll there's one more on my flickr that I am not sure I'll post. I have a few more I may edit; a headshots and closer view of her by the doors

Thanks, I like the light better in the first one also

I checked out the photo on Flickr, it's the closest I have seen to her smile yet!
It's not the best of the set, but I do like it!

 

[Trever1t]

Lol@the outlet. I was like, what outlet! ? I see it now doh!