Thoughts of this pic

[LarryMartin830]

Well my girlfriends mom stole my cam and took some pics and well i think this came out ok... i turned it in to b/w...I took my gf to prom :lmao:

 

[rufus5150]

As I look at it, I'm hunting for the subject. There's a lot going on in the image in terms of movement (not motion, mind you); lines leading this way and that. It's nice, perhaps a bit too heavy in the mid range of tones but the contrasts between light and dark elements and where they're placed is nice. If I wasn't provided the background of the image, I might guess that this was carefully staged with some thoughts to composition (perhaps it was?).

It's got a lot of things going for it, but it's also lacking a clear vision of what the subject is.