Unsure about this one. Opinions appreciated.

[minicoop1985]

Took this last night. Light painted it with my wannabe Icelight. I painted the ground to give it a meaningful foreground, but really not sure if I like this or not. Opinions?

IMG_6470 by Michael Long, on Flickr

 

[robbins.photo]

Took this last night. Light painted it with my wannabe Icelight. I painted the ground to give it a meaningful foreground, but really not sure if I like this or not. Opinions?

IMG_6470 by Michael Long, on Flickr

Ok, so all in all I like. The light painting looks great. I think what's throwing me off a bit is that the ground makes it look like an outside shot, the sky is dark but no stars. So my brain is doing a, wait, something is missing here kind of deal

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[minicoop1985]

It was just plain too hazy out to get a lot of stars. It was an outside shot-you're right.

 

[Braineack]

its a white car on a black bg.

 

[elizpage]

Hmmm, I like it overall. There's just something missing though- I don't know what it is.

 

[Didereaux]

Took this last night. Light painted it with my wannabe Icelight. I painted the ground to give it a meaningful foreground, but really not sure if I like this or not. Opinions?

A decent start. You need highlights on the cars lines/edges. Also and this is the most obviously missing...there is no detail at all under the rear and side of the car.

As a saidi a decent start. Go back do what you did, and add the necessary new parts.

 

[minicoop1985]

Thanks everyone. There's definitely something missing: a good sky. I'll go back and try it again when I get a chance. Maybe this weekend or maybe next week.