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The title sounds kind of like a Harry Potter spell to me, lol. My mentor reminded me of a piece of wisdom I had heard years ago but hadn't crossed my mind in a long time. It is that you couldn't achieve perfection without imperfection. I found this really interesting, and feel that the timing for him to remind me of this was impeccable. He had been watching me meticulously edit these photos and was quiet until I had begun removing a blade of grass from in front of the model's face. He asked me why I felt compelled to do this, and I told him that it was distracting, and that I wanted the image to be perfect. This is when he reminded me of the importance of these imperfections, and to him this blade of grass represented a lot of beauty and depth in the photo. Honestly I felt the same about it, but had been so concerned with what others would have to say about it rather than to follow my first instinct. Lately I have been obsessing over getting everything in each of my photos absolutely perfect, which I attribute to a good amount of the feedback I've been getting from this forum. I'm not saying that the feedback hasn't been incredibly helpful because it has been, but I've been forgetting that I shouldn't be obsessing over perfection when I myself even realize that the most beautiful things in my life are imperfect and unique. My art should always represent what I see as beautiful, not what others prefer.

So, the title of this series ("Uomo Imperfetto") literally translates as "Imperfect Man" in Italian. I see this as both a reflection of myself and of the model, who's imperfections are why I find him to be so beautiful. The reason I chose to use an Italian translation is because this conversation with my mentor inspired me to do some research on the subject of perfection and imperfection, and I learned of an Italian "free thinker" from the late 1500's named Lucilio Vanini who believed that perfection depends on incompleteness ("perfectio propter imperfectionem"). I apologize for the long story to go along with these photos and usually feel that an artist should let his or her work speak for itself, but I feel that my inspiration in this case was worth sharing and could inspire others to think outside the box a little more often, even just a little. I posted two photos titled " http://www.thephotoforum.com/forum/people-photography/343341-man-moon.html " from the same shoot, but there is a difference in meaning and feeling from those two photos and these ones to me. Anyway, here is "Uomo Imperfetto"; I hope you like them, imperfections and all. Shot in all natural light:

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Plus, everything just sounds better in Italian :)

Love the second one. The shadows on the left side are quite mesmerizing. And I probably wouldn't have even noticed that blade of grass in the first one. Well, I mean I would have seen it of course but not really taken any note of it one way or another. Whenever I scroll away, the thing that stays in my mind about the photo is the serene look in the model's eyes.
 
I agree with you and have an appreciation for your work. You have consistently brought an artistic nature to your photos and it's quite refreshing. I like seeing when you post because I'm never quite sure what I'll be exposed to.

By the way, I'm not sure if it's because I'm using the app, but the pictures show as broken links.
 
I agree with you and have an appreciation for your work. You have consistently brought an artistic nature to your photos and it's quite refreshing. I like seeing when you post because I'm never quite sure what I'll be exposed to. By the way, I'm not sure if it's because I'm using the app, but the pictures show as broken links.

Never mind. They're working now.
 
Plus, everything just sounds better in Italian :)

Love the second one. The shadows on the left side are quite mesmerizing. And I probably wouldn't have even noticed that blade of grass in the first one. Well, I mean I would have seen it of course but not really taken any note of it one way or another. Whenever I scroll away, the thing that stays in my mind about the photo is the serene look in the model's eyes.
Hahaha, right?

The shadows on the second image are my favorite part; I considered cropping it to center him a little bit, but once again had to remind myself of the reason WHY I felt the photo was so beautiful and mesmerizing to me. I feel that they create a negative space that is necessary, and cropping would remove too much of both the shadows and the plant so I wouldn't be able to appreciate the entire composition.
 
Geez, Dan - do me a favor...stick to your instincts, just as you have done here. We need to be reminded that an errant blade of grass is not an enemy of portraiture; shadows can be our friends, and too much space may diminish the impact of our model. :)

I trust your instincts implicitly, your work stands on its own strength. There are few people on this forum I would say this to; you are one of them.

In short - git it, bay-bay!!!!
 
Geez, Dan - do me a favor...stick to your instincts, just as you have done here. We need to be reminded that an errant blade of grass is not an enemy of portraiture; shadows can be our friends, and too much space may diminish the impact of our model. :)

I trust your instincts implicitly, your work stands on its own strength. There are few people on this forum I would say this to; you are one of them.

In short - git it, bay-bay!!!!
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I looked at your first image before I read the text and simply because of the title I saw the point of that blade of grass; then when I read the text I was nodding along.

It works for arty shots but I don't think it would work for many genres. ;)
 
Sound work as always Dan. Now here's a challenge: I want you to do one session with a guy WITHOUT a beard, just to see if you can! ;)
 
I don't like the beard shape, and some man-scaping wouldn't hurt. Everything else is 100% dynamite!
 
I think #1 would look really amazing in your matte b/w processing. I really like all of the contrast with the shadows and highlights.
 
I looked at your first image before I read the text and simply because of the title I saw the point of that blade of grass; then when I read the text I was nodding along.

It works for arty shots but I don't think it would work for many genres. ;)
Artsy is definitely my genre, so I'm ok with that!
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Sound work as always Dan. Now here's a challenge: I want you to do one session with a guy WITHOUT a beard, just to see if you can! ;)
Haha, I've done that before! Beardless men just don't tickle me the way I like.
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