Charme En Soie

[MariHarris]

New shot! Please let me know what you think.

 

[Jeff15]

Very nice but a pity you cut the top of the head off......

 

[pixmedic]

lovely image, but i feel it would have been stronger if you hadnt cut the top of her head off. the headpiece she has on seems to be part of the outfit and should have been included in the final image.

 

[Derrel]

lovely image, but i feel it would have been stronger if you hadnt cut the top of her head off. the headpiece she has on seems to be part of the outfit and should have been included in the final image.

I believe that is correct, that the headpiece should have been included. I think this could be improved by cropping a bit off of the left side of the frame, and by doing some careful cloning work on her eyeball, on the camera-right side of the frame.

 

[MariHarris]

merci @pixmedic @Derrel for the critique!