Engagement Session Critique

[jadelm31]

I sense a real creative flare here...not sure the flare hit the mark in regards to imagery you would imagine with love but I admire your creativity and the way you shot through things, different angles, and from interesting perspectives.....keep going and working on that.

 

[pickle788]

#1 Out of focus bush in the foreground is a killer for me.

#2 Ok. Find myself looking at the red train on the right side

#3,4,5 Don't do anything for me. Can only see a car in the reflection and really have to look for the couple (May have worked better if you removed the car from the reflection)

#6 Captured a nice photo of the couple but not a fan of the processing

#7 Don't like the bit blocking the couples feet, legs. Maybe crop a bit more of the top off also

Just my 2cents worth

 

[DiskoJoe]

Not my favorite cliché.

Possibly one decent one, #2.

Its only cliche when its senior photos. This just seems weird. You clip their feet in #1.

 

[hombredelmar]

I am wondering why no one mentioned skin color?
It seems as if you understand how to compose the shots but you need to work on the skin color and overexposed images, faces in particular.
Otherwise you are not that bad, keep practicing!!!
Good Luck

 

[CdTSnap]

Only one i really like is number 2 but it just feels to cold for an engagement shoot you know?

 

[littlenomad]

I really like 2. The reflection ones are too busy for me. It's arty yes and an interesting concept. I like it as an experimental thing but not as an engagement shoot. I don't actually mind the location at all.

And I agree with the 2 comments below:
#1 Out of focus bush in the foreground is a killer for me.
#6 Captured a nice photo of the couple but not a fan of the processing

 

[PropilotBW]

I have to agree with the reflection shots. They have to go.