Fall session with friend C&C please

[Jethro]

Yesterday's autumn shoot with my friend - PLEASE C&C!

(Complete gallery and better resolution can be found here: Martuccia by Jetthro T at Coroflot )

 

[tirediron]

C&C per req:

1. I like the image overall, but it seems slightly soft, and you HAVE to get that flash off of the camera!

2. Interesting expression; you really needed a fill image left to reduce the dynamic range here. The yellow of her scarf is very hot, verging on blown in a couple of areas.

3. Really nice, but cropped a little too tightlight on the LH side and bottom for my taste. Comments per #1 with respect to flash.

4. I like the use of the umbrella, but again fill light was needed, this time image right.

Overall, nice images, but they would be MUCH stronger with some off-camera lights added.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John

 

[Jethro]

Thank you very much As for the flash, I'm planning to get one, but first I have to sell my Lensbaby since I found out that I dont have such a use for it as I had hoped. So these were all taken using only the natural light

 

[shaneclark]

Love the all shots. Wonderful and nice capturing. Expressions and movements are well captured. The use of umbrella is good to making the shot very beautiful.

 

[Jethro]

Thank you shaneclark

 

[PrestonS]

Might just be me but the white balance seems off in these. I'm getting some yellowish tent.

 

[Scuba]

I was thinking the same thing about the yellow tint. I agree with the above C&C.

 

[Jethro]

Looks fine on my monitor..I guess its a different calibration