First attempt at a boudoir shoot CC welcome

[2WheelPhoto]

1st thing that grabs my eye is the bottom of her feet. If they are dirty clean them or fix them in post

When I was in studio lighting class, I thought the instructor was full of $#^& when he told us to keep some wet ones around because some models will need their feet wiped, until I hung around there for some of his real shoots

 

[bunny99123]

I think Bunny's idea of just cloning out the torso and feet is an excellent idea on this one pose!

Thank you, Derrel

 

[Crabwok]

Wow! Thank you all for all of the feed back! Sorry I've been a distracted with work/moving to spend much time on here. Anyway all of the advise is very helpful. I totally agree that the angles/choice of focal length are defiantly something I need to work on, especially when shooting something like this. That wide lens is just too much fun

 

[Photographiend]

You got a lot of valuable critique here. I know it can seem harsh at first but you will find when you are experimenting you will get a lot of praise from friends and family who don't know much about "Photography" and to balance that out posting here will help nudge you in the right direction to build on what you already have.

The 3rd was the best of the bunch for me.

 

[SamiJoSchwirtz]

People noticed dirty feet but not the scab/cut/shave cut whatever/ right below her feet on her ankle? Lol, gorgeous mosel

 

[2WheelPhoto]

People noticed dirty feet but not the scab/cut/shave cut whatever/ right below her feet on her ankle? Lol, gorgeous mosel

I noticed it, but compared to the dirt it was sorta' irrelevant. And i suspect you meant "model" =)

 

[Photographiend]

I thought that was a blister from uncomfortable shoes...

 

[o hey tyler]

Some better angles are definitely needed here and some DOF.

More DoF? Everything is pretty much in focus as it is.