Lay Back Down

[PeterGrusel]

Ahoi there!

Even though this one is not pure black and white and shows a little, little bit of a coffeecream color, I would like to post it here and get some opinions about it!

If you hate pics which are not purely b&w within this forum let me know and I´ll remove it again!

Here it is (full version available by clicking on it):




Thanks!
- Peter

 

[Derrel]

I looked at the larger version. Thre things stand out. 1) Her armpit area looks, well, unsightly...the skin look stretched, and weird. Not sexy. 2) Her outline looks too "jagged", both on the bust side, and on the back side--she needs to have more of an arch in her back, and her bust-line needs to be more prominent, and the line of her simple dress needs to be smoother and more-fluid below the bust-line 3)The Lay Back Down text overlay is pulling the eye's line of sight to the right, and she is looking to the left---that just does not work for me. I'd suggest moving the Lay Back Down text to the left somewhat...at least centered, and perhaps even left-justified.

Those are my thoughts.