Miss A (nsfw)

[Robin_Usagani]

She is kind enough to let me share some photos. Unfortunately not the ones I really love. One for now.. will post more later.

 

[DanOstergren30 5]

Seems just a tad bit over exposed to me, but otherwise I think this is excellent.

 

[manny212]

Nice hdr! jk. Nice. Robin did you vignette this?

 

[kathyt]

I think I would bring the exposure down a notch too. It would change the mood and add more appeal.

 

[amolitor]

I'll have to think about it, but my first reaction is 'why the shallow DoF and a 'deep' posture?'

It definitely doesn't look traditional, and that might be an excellent thing. Something to ponder.

She's lovely, and I have no beef with any of your other technical or artistic choices. Well done, for sure. Just that one element I want to take some time with.

 

[cgipson1]

Very nice, Robin! She is lovely! Personal taste, I would lower the exposure a tad.. and bring up the contrast a bit...

 

[Robin_Usagani]

I made the whole set bright so it gives it that wake up in the morning feeling great kind of feeling. Here is another.

 

[EIngerson]

That one is outstanding!

 

[amolitor]

Interesting. Hearing what your concept was kind of snaps the pictures into "focus" as it were. I get it. Having a concept at all is a powerful move, and you pulled together a "look" to support it really well, I think.

Now I am questioning the color palette Maybe a little desaturated would fit the concept better?

 

[Robin_Usagani]

Nice hdr! jk. Nice. Robin did you vignette this?

Manny.. maybe... I add it sometimes. Hopefully not too much because that is one of my biggest pet peeves when someone use too much vignette .

 

[The_Traveler]

I made the whole set bright so it gives it that wake up in the morning feeling great kind of feeling.

This is more like an 'are-we-getting-closer-to-the-sun' kind of feeling

 

[Robin_Usagani]

I made the whole set bright so it gives it that wake up in the morning feeling great kind of feeling.

This is more like an 'are-we-getting-closer-to-the-sun' kind of feeling

i am not following you lol.

 

[pgriz]

She has the kind of eyes that make me fall in love with my wife every morning. Like the way you used the shallow DOF to direct the attention to the important stuff.

 

[The_Traveler]

I made the whole set bright so it gives it that wake up in the morning feeling great kind of feeling.

This is more like an 'are-we-getting-closer-to-the-sun' kind of feeling

i am not following you lol.

the first one looks blanched

 

[Robin_Usagani]

I dont know Lew. I have viewed it with my iphone, ipad, calibrated monitor and they all look decent to me. I have also printed an album and they are fantastic and look exactly like my monitor.