music video feedback

[evabomanges]

hey guys,
me and my husband had a task to film music video for a song "Let Me Go"

what kind of message do you get/ see while watching it? any input/feedback appreciated. link below and password : drew



thank you!

 

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It's ok.
I am not a fan of so many jump cuts and loooooong crossfades. I'd drop a lot of the jumps and give it more continuity. It feels very random to me. Remember the 180 rule of filmmaking. And I think the last scene should have been a longer hold on the couple after the reveal, and maybe a dolly zoom there to close it out.
I'd consider a re-stage and block it out a little cleaner.

Just one opinion. Good luck getting it done.

 

[evabomanges]

It's ok.
I am not a fan of so many jump cuts and loooooong crossfades. I'd drop a lot of the jumps and give it more continuity. It feels very random to me. Remember the 180 rule of filmmaking. And I think the last scene should have been a longer hold on the couple after the reveal, and maybe a dolly zoom there to close it out.
I'd consider a re-stage and block it out a little cleaner.

Just one opinion. Good luck getting it done.

THANK YOU