My first thread.

[ChancezZz]

Here are some photos that I took. some critiquing would be appreciated, Instagram : ChancezZz

 

[photographerfrankie]

Great lighting [emoji106] I don't really like the aperture in the second photo, I'd prefer it to be more circular bokeh. Great pics though! [emoji16]


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[smoke665]

The first one I really like, though I'd straighten the image to get rid of the obvious slanted line of wall that glares at you. Number #2 I don't get at all.

 

[Derrel]

I like #1,mostly, but I dislike #2. Welcome to TPF.