My first thread.

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by ChancezZz, Jun 12, 2017.

  1. ChancezZz

    ChancezZz TPF Noob!

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    Here are some photos that I took. some critiquing would be appreciated, Instagram : ChancezZz

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  2. photographerfrankie

    photographerfrankie TPF Noob!

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    Great lighting I don't really like the aperture in the second photo, I'd prefer it to be more circular bokeh. Great pics though!


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    smoke665 TPF Supporters Supporting Member

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    The first one I really like, though I'd straighten the image to get rid of the obvious slanted line of wall that glares at you. Number #2 I don't get at all.
     
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    I like #1,mostly, but I dislike #2. Welcome to TPF.
     

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