Recent Boutique Fashion shoot for Advertisement.

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Hmmm... I like the images ('though I think the 'foot flash' in #1 might be a tough strong), but I'm not sure that I see these as clothing advertisement images, especially in #1 where the dress actually appears to be slightly under-exposed and in both, the background has a lot of sharply focused detail which draws the eye's attention from the subject.
 

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I love the concept, and the location. Your poses are great as well. They seem unpolished. #1 is underexposed and the OCF is angled at the wrong spot. I would never angle near the crotch. I probably would have angled more toward the belt area to get more of the outfit exposed. Her legs look very cyanotic (lack of oxygen) in #2. I would just bump the exposure a bit on that as well. Do you own Portraiture software? If not it would be a great investment for you to polish things up in the end, especially for shoots such as this.
 

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Yeah, these pictures appear to be mainly trying to sell me some walls, but there's this girl in the way so I can't really get a good look at the walls.
 

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