Website Critique

[LarryTheLawrence]

A thread to show off photography blog/websites get feedback of photos and layouts of blog/websites


Let me go first

Lawrence Anca Photography

Thanks

 

[snowbear]

Why did you cross post this to multiple forums?

 

[Light Guru]

I don't think I've seen a visit counter on a website in about 15 years.

 

[snowbear]

I didn't go. I doubt I will.
Maybe it's just me but I have a thing about your first two posts (he cross posted this) being "click here." I suspect he won't stay - hit & run.

 

[nathan cox]

A thread to show off photography blog/websites get feedback of photos and layouts of blog/websites


Let me go first

Lawrence Anca Photography

Thanks

When I opened it, had 2 menu things

Beside that it was ok
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[LarryTheLawrence]

Sorry I'm very new to forums I won't do it again

Why did you cross post this to multiple forums?

 

[Dillard]

I'll bite...


1) Your "about me" has absolutely nothing about you other than the fact that you're an urban photographer. If I was looking to for someone to shoot an event or location and received a referral to your site, I would like to know a little bit about who I was hiring. It doesn't have to be an overly creative spill, but something more concrete would be ideal.

2) Why list a personal email, as well as a business email? I feel like there is no need for both, and to be honest, I don't know if I would want to hire someone who's email address was "LaKid".

3) I don't find the layout of the photo galleries appealing. They are all quite small on my screen, requiring me to click on the ones I want to see larger. Not really ideal for grabbing someones attention.

 

[snowbear]

Sorry I'm very new to forums I won't do it again

Why did you cross post this to multiple forums?

Nothing personal, it just makes you look like a spammer or very impatient. That being said,
Welcome aboard.

How about posting one or two of your favorite shots here.

 

[LarryTheLawrence]

I'll bite...


1) Your "about me" has absolutely nothing about you other than the fact that you're an urban photographer. If I was looking to for someone to shoot an event or location and received a referral to your site, I would like to know a little bit about who I was hiring. It doesn't have to be an overly creative spill, but something more concrete would be ideal.

2) Why list a personal email, as well as a business email? I feel like there is no need for both, and to be honest, I don't know if I would want to hire someone who's email address was "LaKid".

3) I don't find the layout of the photo galleries appealing. They are all quite small on my screen, requiring me to click on the ones I want to see larger. Not really ideal for grabbing someones attention.

Thanks for the feedback I really appreciate it

 

[LarryTheLawrence]

These are my top ones at least in my opinion the first is a long exposure of a freeway in japan and the last one is of my brother on the freeway (we ran on it to take a photo) those are the only ones I think needed explaining.

Sorry I'm very new to forums I won't do it again

Why did you cross post this to multiple forums?

Nothing personal, it just makes you look like a spammer or very impatient. That being said,
Welcome aboard.

How about posting one or two of your favorite shots here.