Which one?

[DGMPhotography]

Some shots from a recent shoot.

I like both of them, but I feel like they're too similar to use both. Thoughts?



TIA!

 

[weepete]

2nd

 

[zombiesniper112 12]

Agree, the second pose looks more natural and less forced.

 

[ronlane]

Agreed the second one. I would however either crop or burn the knees, as they drew my eyes away from the subject.

 

[tirediron]

Agree the second is the stronger pose, but those ripped trousers are very visually irritating.

 

[Braineack]

not much of a fan of either, im afraid.

 

[Jeff1547 47]

Second one for me too.....

 

[Christie Photo]

not much of a fan of either, im afraid.

The first is definitely better, but I agree with Braineack... Some additional photography is needed. Hands everywhere... and SO much arms. The back of the hands (as in the second) is less flattering. Even with the fingers tucked, they take up as much area as her face.

Good model. Good choice of background with this outfit, but needs different lighting scheme to work with the sleeveless top.

Good concept!
-Pete

 

[DGMPhotography]

not much of a fan of either, im afraid.

The first is definitely better, but I agree with Braineack... Some additional photography is needed. Hands everywhere... and SO much arms. The back of the hands (as in the second) is less flattering. Even with the fingers tucked, they take up as much area as her face.

Good model. Good choice of background with this outfit, but needs different lighting scheme to work with the sleeveless top.

Good concept!
-Pete

You put into words what I couldn't figure out in my head.

Too much arms.

Thanks for the feedback, everyone. Here are some other shots!

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[DGMPhotography]

Bump.

 

[Derrel]

not much of a fan of either, im afraid.

The first is definitely better, but I agree with Braineack... Some additional photography is needed. Hands everywhere... and SO much arms. The back of the hands (as in the second) is less flattering. Even with the fingers tucked, they take up as much area as her face.

Good model. Good choice of background with this outfit, but needs different lighting scheme to work with the sleeveless top.

Good concept!
-Pete

I agree...I prefer the first frame, where she cups her face in her hands; the second frame shows the backs of both hands, and is less-appealing to me. Still...neither pose is very flattering.

 

[Peeb70 6]

Of the first 2, I preferred the 2nd but the critique that followed was well thought-out and helpful.

 

[DGMPhotography]

Should I make a new post for the new photos?