More Beach Portraits - PLEASE C&C

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Your niece is cute.. what a smile!

A little nitpick.. her eyes, not sure if it is the processing or not.. but they are uneven in color / lightness / sharpness. Check your original and see if it is the same there...

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I like the first shot as it is, but the heavy vignette kills the second one.
 

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As Tony said, dump the vignette on #2 and you'd have a good photo. That little lady can really pose! :lol:
 

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I agree with Charlie, the retouching needs to be redone on #1.
 

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I really like composition, lighting, and pose in image #1, but I see two glaring problems with the processing:

1. It seems like you have overdone the eyes... Especially the whites...

2. Her lips seem painted in an unnatural way...

Cute kid! Thanks for sharing!
 

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I thought it was my monitor here at work. I rather see the girl's face in image #2 than the PP in image #1
Can you post the unedited version on #1, or at least exclude the editing you did on her face and lips?

love the posing for daddy and dtr
 

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The poses are really nice but they are both so underexposed it is giving them those orange tones.
 

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