So we're not to post other people's work here, unless it's to praise them? (edit: and by post, I mean post a link to) I think it's easier to learn by ripping into crappy work than complimenting good work, simply because it's easier to see what went wrong, and where there could be improvement. In this case, posing and lighting. With good work, a lot of what makes it good is very subtle, and harder for beginners like me to see outright. It becomes clear to see after someone else mentions it, but if you plopped an awesome picture in front of me and asked me what makes it so awesome, I'd have trouble naming anything technical.
I guess my opinion is: you put it on the internet, you opened yourself up for criticism. If you don't like it, make your stuff private or take it down. Particularly the people who are trying to make a business of it... some people will like your work, others won't. If you can't handle the heat, and want it to be all sunshine and skittles, get out of the kitchen. (general 'you' here, of course)
If this guy comes to defend his work, I hope no one will candy coat their responses in light of this thread. He would get reality smacked if he just came here as a 'beginner trying to go pro,' that's for sure.